jueves, 15 de octubre de 2009

Chile to world championship

Chile has always has been a country that has not been very successful in sport internationally. Especially in football that is the world leading sport, so it is very competitive. Other countries in South America usually win us, as might say that Brazil is the best football team in the world. Argentina also has been an important country almost as much as Brazil, but lately has not fared well. Paraguay and uruguay are other strong competitors. While we are not so losers like Peru and Bolivia, the news that we classify the South African world puts us pretty happy. Usually we end up suffering and depending on the results of other matches. This time was different, probably because the work that has done Bielsa, without ignoring the players who have done a very good job too. The captain, Claudio Bravo has been a big support for his character and his abilities as a player. Arturo Vidal is an excellent defense on several occasions and scored goals, like Gary Medel. My favorite player is Orellana, better known as "green duende". He has suffered much for being where he is, and when nobody believed,he continued fighting and carry on. In Catholic uUniversity clubs or important as Colo Colo, did not admit because his short stature. Audax Italiano bring him a home, they accept and believed in him. Gave the possibility of giving all the tools emerge. So I like this player. recently his brother dropped in jail for drug traffic, and orellana dedicated the goal that he scored against Colombia. for the World Championchips I want to be with my friends probably do barbecues and drinking beer. I would love to go to South Africa but is very expensive, but being here is not a bad option. The idea is celebrate. Is just think positive.

1 comentario:

  1. Good Rodrigo,

    Can you re-write these lines, for me , please? "Chile has always has been a country that has not been very successful in sport internationally. Especially in football"

    Also, clarify this one, pls. "Argentina also has been an important country almost as much as Brazil, but lately has not fared well. Paraguay and uruguay are other strong competitors"

    We really say, "qualified for" not "classify"

    Also work on this piece, "This time was different, probably because the work that has done Bielsa, without ignoring the players who have done a very good job too. The captain, Claudio Bravo has been a big support for his character and his abilities as a player. Arturo Vidal is an excellent defense on"

    There are many cohesion problems.

    The marking is as follows:

    Task completion, 3 points

    Lexis and cohesion, 1 point

    Grammar, 1.5

    5.5 points, grade, 4.5

    Paula

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