miércoles, 30 de septiembre de 2009

Presidential elections coming soon. In my country, is a very important process since democracy return. Currently we have four candidates in the race for the post of president. First in the polls is Sebastian Piñera who is a businessman with deep pockets, and above all: lust for power. He owns several major corporations as LanChile or Chilevision. Try to win the people buying their votes. Piñera represents the right's people, people of high society ... but based on deception is gaining the confidence of poor people who are tired of the actual government. Second, Eduardo Frei, who like piñerita is a businessman with really deep pockets. He has been a senator and president and has been involved in several scandals. In her period, he do nothing good. Finally, Ominami and Arrate are candidates unhappy with the concertación they have chosen to campaign on their own to feed their personal egos. In the end, those candidates with fewer votes will be negotiate votes with the candidates with more support, to obtain benefits for themselves. It is short for the electoral process and there is nothing new, only the options that gives us a representative democracy. Again, I prefer to abstain and not be part of this political circus. Anyway, most people like to vote. people feel they are asserting their rights as citizens. Especially older people, I believe that most of the time they feel heard, then they feel that voting can give their opinion.

1 comentario:

  1. Good Rodrigo,

    Try to improve this sentence:

    "Try to win the people buying their votes. Piñera represents the right's people, people of high society..."

    Do you say "actual" government? and "In her period he do nothing good"?

    Check this,

    " In the end, those candidates with fewer votes will be negotiate votes with the candidates with more support, to obtain benefits for themselves". It also needs punctuation!

    And ...

    "It is short for the electoral process and there is nothing new, only the options that gives us a representative democracy,"

    And finally...

    "then they feel that voting can give their opinion."

    You get 1.5 points.

    Paula

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